- There needs to be lip synching in the opening singing part.
- More lip synching needed (mentioned by most people)
- Colours edited on southend seem too much (too bold)
- Add in more orange as its the theme
- Some colours used in editing are too intense for the viewers
- Beach scenes need taking out as they are not related
- Editing is good but feels over done
- Setting is good in till changes to beach
- Some effects are over used
- Could have used more shots like close-ups
- Could include more quirky transitions
- Shot when lip synching-when no singing and just a beat
- Some after effects do not match each other. There are harsh and bold colours that come out of no where.
- There are too many strobe effects used
- More OT texts throughout
Good feedback
- All music video fits with the shooting material
- The shots used are varied and fit next to each other
- Explain the other colours used
- Images are well in time with sound
- There are lots of good scenes used
- Good use of effects when edited
- Fun and flows nicely
- Camera work is smooth and professional looking
Overall the good feedback was mostly repeated and some of the improvements were repeated. Especially about the effects, the beach, and the lip-synching. These are the 3 main things that will be concentrated on when improving the music video.
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