1st Draft Website Feedback

Improvement for website

• Social media icons do not work
• Some images poor quality
• Change photo to photos or to gallery - this would be more professional
• Need more merchandise
• Opening age as too much going on
• Font is not consistent
• Font page picture is quite out of focus

Good Feedback

• Tour dates page looks very professional
• Synergy is good throughout
• Merchandise looks professional
• Good that the video is on the homepage so you can click it straight away
• Good layout of the pictures on gallery
• good layout everything can be found easily

1st Draft Digipak Feedback

Improvements of the Feedback

• Orange needs to be bolder looks almost yellow
• Bottom right photo does not fit theme
• Font could look more professional
• The space could have been utilised more
• Different fonts for OT
• The link for the website would not be on a professional CD cover - the customer wouldn't want to type in the whole URL

Good Feedback

• Synergy links really well
• Likes how its not a photoshoot
• Most photos fit
• Shows artist image well

1st Draft Music Video Feedback

The improvements in the feedback we got were:

• There needs to be lip synching in the opening singing part.
• More lip synching needed (mentioned by most people)
• Colours edited on southend seem too much (too bold)
• Add in more orange as its the theme
• Some colours used in editing are too intense for the viewers
• Beach scenes need taking out as they are not related
• Editing is good but feels over done
• Setting is good in till changes to beach
• Some effects are over used
• Could have used more shots like close-ups
• Could include more quirky transitions
• Shot when lip synching-when no singing and just a beat
• Some after effects do not match each other. There are harsh and bold colours that come out of no where.
• There are too many strobe effects used
• More OT texts throughout

Good feedback

• All music video fits with the shooting material
• The shots used are varied and fit next to each other
• Explain the other colours used
• Images are well in time with sound
• There are lots of good scenes used
• Good use of effects when edited
• Fun and flows nicely
• Camera work is smooth and professional looking

Overall the good feedback was mostly repeated and some of the improvements were repeated. Especially about the effects, the beach, and the lip-synching. These are the 3 main things that will be concentrated on when improving the music video.

1st Draft Music Video Teacher Feedback

Minute by minute feedback

12:23 - Really like this sot, does it need that effect

19:07 - Lip syncing out

Need some proper close up lip synching

48 - Shot too long (lovely transition rom shoes)

Lion low angle too long

1.16 - Sharpen/contrast garden shot

1.48 - Jumping lion sot to the beat

2:02 - 2:08 - Too long with no effects too much contrast

2:28 - Beautiful shot can you Sharpen/contrast?

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